I downs a rum
Or two
she sat
across from me
With a wine list
Legs crossed
at our table
watching
the leaves fly
from our book
into the night
i downs a rum
or two
while watching
My dreams sink
in my selfmade
Fortified
Libre harbor
knowing
I’d made the holes
Knowing
the reason being
for the mass
sinkings
Was
that my boredom
Simply bores
many holes
in many of my
Lime dream hulls
I downs a rum
Or two
she tries
to grab a leaf
from the blank page
between us
i wave back
as she
memorably
blurs away
i’d cry
but really
i’m not drunk enough to care
SOs
I downs a rum
Or two
Β© bg 2012
I really like this!
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thanks for letting me know,its one of my favorites , I’m glad you liked it. kindest regards bg βΊπβΊ
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I read your poem again, bg.
It’s really good, btw. bg, you are a genius.
It’s just monkey-logic, so don’t mind me sayin’, but a girl can’t get very far with her legs crossed. Wrapped around something maybe…but…
I hope that made you laugh, bg. (now where did that bananabanana rum get to?)
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Neither can a guy little monk WUhhAhAhAhAh.
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Little monk is warmly blushing…Lol
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Is that too much fannduggery?
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Love it. (A rum or two’s never enough, btw)
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I concur :)glad u enjoyed,
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Is that banana rum, bg?
Is there such a thing as banana rum, bg?
Can I ask you another question, bg?
bg, I like you.ππππππππ
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Little monk that’s a statement πππππthank you for saying ππππrum can go with anything in my experience. Lol π
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So, bg, banana rum can go with big bananas? Does that make it bananabanana rum?
Are U sure its a garden, not a jungle?…Lol
It’s feeling a bit like a jungle…locked…jungle
swinging from the vines drunk on bananabanana rum…Lol
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It potent stuff superbananamonkey watch out for that tree as well as the vine police πππππππ
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What tree?
(Famous last words of mortally wounded people, Chapter 5, Natural Hazards)
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Umm the big one barking at u lol πππ
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Oh, THAT tree…(I’m such a confused little monk…πππππππππππππππππππππΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏ
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Vine police? I don’t like them. They fine me for reckless swinging when I’m simply being a monkey and confiscate my yummy bananas.
Thanks for the warning, bg. Have I every told you that I like you?
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I downs a rum
Or two
she tries
to grab a leaf
from the blank page
between us
i wave back
as she
memorably
blurs away
It is amazing how profound a blank page can be. It’s a great read, bg…
strikes to the coreπ
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Where you getting them apples from, is superbananamonkey fetching em from up high for u?? ππππ
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Lol…Did she restock your banana supply?
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Yes Thankyou π what would the world be without bananas. πππππππππ
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And the giggles start again…Were you channeling me for this post, btw? Forget it, you don’t have to answer that.
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No lol.
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Wow! I needed a rum or two after I finished reading. Very nice!
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I have always wanted to inspire folks, remember a rum or two a day keeps the soberness away. ππ
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