I was
feeling
Rather
alien
today
Just a
greenish
Foreign
organic organism
Floating
around
In some
metal
vessel
A pod
carrying
a foreign seed
Towards
a foreign shore
©bg 2010
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Hi bg. Now this could really be happening! Thank you for liking my poem “Alerted!” Peace and Best Wishes. #TheFoureyedPoet.
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no worries ,i enjoyed ,keep writing 😊
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Xenophobia
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yep 😊
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I feel foreign every time I go into the English countryside as everyone is white! In London I fit in perfectly..
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yes , it’s funny how out of place one can feel ,even when we should feel at home 😊
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Well I feel at home any were am around Jehovah’s witness… I notice they are never racists
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well thats good news ,but i thinks you haven’t known them all ☺
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Well they are not perfect but I trust them all
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well i trust them all to be human and so far i haven’t been proved wrong.
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I love this. It appeals to my scifi imagination. 🙂
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yes ,it does have a certain scifi vibe,i’m glad you enjoyed and i appreciate the feedback ,so cool 😊
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Ah, those not busy being born are busy dying … your poem made me think of that, for some reason!
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could be the seed and pod part ,could be xenophobia kills the ability for people(seeds)to grow so they rot in their fear , anyways let me know if you figure it out 😊 by the way dave its great to hear from you 😊
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Xenophobia is the root of a lot of problems these days, so could be … people need something positive to grow into and there may be too much stunting going on. The answer, my friend, is blowing in the wind …
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yes but hopefully its the cure and not the disease 🙂 i dig the old bob 😊
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Beautiful, bg. Thank you for sharing that one. It reminds me of a place I’ve been before…
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😊
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So cute and simply adorable poem.👍👌👍👌
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i appreciate your feedback, i’m very pleased you thought so 🎃😊
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I think this is one of my favorites of yours yet. 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿(‘cuz these go to 11…Lol…11 green palm fronds for your organic organism)
Xenophobia happens, but is your protagonist experiencing Claustrophobia?🙈
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lol not yet ,maybe next week ,glad you like. i wrote it on a plan trip back in 2010 on my way to south america when i overhears a conversation behind me that made me laugh 🎃🔫🍌
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Lol…funny the things that stick, isn’t it?🙈
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