a directional haiku

the spirits wind dies
the weathercock is stranded
blind at the crossroads

Β©bg 2016


47 thoughts on “a directional haiku

  1. It sounds like the weathercock is in need of a little puff of helpful wind…Lol
    Would it help if I swing my vine past it?
    Nicely done, bg

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      • No…Lol
        It’s creatively using my skills/abilities to help the poor weathercock, ‘cuz who wants to be stuck there?
        I feel a responsive haiku coming on…πŸ™ˆ


      • more than…
        but I would need some kind of epic poetry form for that.

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      • Lol…Are you looking for the sonnet version?πŸ™ˆ (I did practice up on Spenser…Britomart and all that)
        It is an “epic” sonnet then…Lol

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      • You know, bg, that’s a lot of banana leaf fronds….πŸ™ˆ
        all that fanning must be moving something (or starting a fire?…Lol)🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿(I like to be thorough…)

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      • hey, as long is it moves the old weathercock…Lol

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      • You want me to cave and tell you, tell you in a cave, tell you how to cave, or D…all of the above?…LolπŸ™ˆπŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅πŸŽ΅

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      • Lol…you did opt for weathercock.
        Weather vane would have been safer…not as much fun…but safer, slightly…

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      • yes there were reasons for that ,you would of seen a rooster with its head chopped off run around ,till its spirit (blood)gone then it hits the dust . anyway i was aware of the risk i took lol πŸ˜†πŸŽƒπŸ”«πŸŒ

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      • well, here is a “g” rated morning chuckle for you: I went downstairs to get my morning coffee and found a post-it note from my youngest stuck by my mug:
        “I need laundry done for shower. in case i forget.”
        translation: he is planning his once-in-a-whatever shower, and wants me to wash the pair of shorts and shirt he wears every single day…LolπŸ™ˆ
        (he smells really nice about twice a month…Lol)

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      • U R naughty…good to know.
        Don’t want to let the weathercock rust, or it won’t be able to move even if the wind blows on it…Lol

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      • well, little monk had a little more fun with the directional haiku…
        You’ve got more mail…LolπŸ™ˆ
        (sorry, I kinda sorta couldn’t resist…)🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🍸


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