i say
throw me a sledgehammer
i want out of this godforsaken jail
i say
throw me a sledgehammer
for mercy’s sakes can’t you hear me wail
i say
i’m so sick of sharing my cell
with my glowing shit effigies in the pail
i say
my heads a wrecking ball
but my pale bodies entombed and frail
i say
weary as my body be upon this rusty cross of nails
i sayΒ
weary as my body be upon this rusty bed of nails
i say
this wrecking ball just can’t be laid down
mine enemy is the one who holds the fixed scales
i say
i’ll swing up that wrecking ball till the sky is brought down
i’ll swing up that wrecking ball the next time i exhales
Β© bg 2014
BG, I felt this. This is my favorite. And I love the format, the way it speaks.
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cool ,i wrote it awhile ago and thought i’d share it again, feedback like yours makes me glad i did .thankyou πβΊπ
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Glad you did too BG
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Being a poet involves much head-banging ( been there).
Well-crafted rhythm and rhyme scheme. Thank you for liking my post!
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cheers for your feedback and no worries i wished i had time to read and like more. i’ll get round to that soon you’ve got a great blog πβΊπ
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I say, “I’d rather be a sparrow than a snail” ! π
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lol ,i say what’s wrong with been a plump quail πβΊπ
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Even better!!! π
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I loved this!! Great job. Great post!!
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fantastic ,so nice of you to let me know i appreciate the feedback πβΊπ
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You’re welcome. It’s my pleasure. Keeping up the good writing.
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Brilliant flair of words and so well written.
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i’m glad you enjoyed ,cheers for you feedback ,very much appreciated π
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Thanks and welcome friend
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Good job, my blogging buddy! Naked hugs!
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cool ,i’m glad you liked it my friend . great to receive your feedback thankyou πβΊπ
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You’re more than welcome! Naked hugs!
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