betting on black days
ante up your depression
at lifes roulette wheel
©bg 2016
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betting on black days
ante up your depression
at lifes roulette wheel
©bg 2016
resurrecting the trashcan bard 
Till the card hits the table, another chip in the pot, all offers of mercy play idle, the forehead growing hot, till the conclusion calls wild, have you won or lost the whole lot?
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awesome 😊☺😊
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Evocative and succinct.
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thank you for your feedback muchly appreciated ☺😊☺
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A dark spiral…
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aye
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You remind me of Kenny Rodger song the Gambler. Its cool.
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that hadn’t even crossed my mind but i can’t deny i don’t know the song as i luv it ,great song and probably over my life the song i’ve sung the most after happy birthday .cheers for your feedback muchly appreciated 😊☺😊
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Gambling away depression. That would be ideal. A sure winner.
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not the intended interpretation i had in mind when i wrote the haiku but hey carl i luv your positive spin on my haiku , fantastic ,cheers for your thoughts 😊☺😊
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Good!
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thanks 😊 i appreciate the feedback ☺
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Beautiful!
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cheers 😊
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Cheers mate!
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I say god damn…that’s good.
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hey i’m super chuffed that you thought so 😊 thanking you for your feedback it’s greatly appreciated 😊☺😊
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No worries at all.
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