U thought
U might
start loving me tomorrow …
naked dog shit
always waits
2b scooped
up
AS
it moon bathe’s
on aΒ
deserted pavement
throw
your tasteless
crotchless knickers
into the
blind monkeys
cup
eat
my brains out
of my
distorted phallic
bell head
till
with our
relationships
menstruations
of
unprecedented
lies spent
U’ll
giggle yourself to sleep
as my
heart sinks
like a
lead fetal crap
as it
breaks up
in a
public toilet
stewing bowl
peewhiz
this abortion
of a
relationship sacrifice
is but a
menopause
of decay
to
cum
from which
U
walk away
with me
clinging
to your
stiletto
toilet brush
heel
looking like
1
pissed off
fetus troll
…but U wanted me gone tonight
by bg 2010
So much anger for so little pleasure. Loved it!
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good to know πi appreciate the feedback as i did wonder how this one would be received πβΊπ
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Offensively wonderful ; ) Well done!
Meno<3
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i can understand that πi enjoyed your feedback thanks for posting it πβΊπ
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My pleasure, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!
Meno<3
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cheers πβΊπ
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I enjoyed reading it
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thanks for letting me know ,i wasn’t sure if folks would ,i appreciates your feedback πβΊπ
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This is serene and beautiful despite the harshness of topic. Artfully written π
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thank you for your frank feedback ,i appreciated your thoughts πβΊπ
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Beautiful. I just love seeing your posts again. I’ve missed them. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece with me.
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ok ,no worries ,glad you enjoyed ,thanks muchly for the feedback πβΊπ
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You’re welcome.
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Great work, this is powerful. All I can say is, you nailed it.
Harlon
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thanks Harlon ,it was a experimental piece i wrote awhile back so i’m pumped to receive your feedback πβΊπ
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Interesting! Naked hugs!
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yes, i think that as well βΊcheers for your thoughts and hugs πβΊπ
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Have a great weekend!
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you as well πβΊπ
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