Relegate
those wretched thoughts
That so torment
my mind
With Angry images
That germinate
As gorse
across a pristine
Panoramic view
Till their thorns
tattoo
bleeding Misery
into my eyes
I turn in blind panic
fleeing
To the past
To recall
fleeting visions
Of days
soaked in tranquillity
But
the flooded lands
are
quickly
trickerly
abandoned
in an
ecoerrlogical
ark
of transgressional ages
containing
present bred
hell bent
emotions
Their attack
so insistently sadistic
My line
of defence
is shredded
My diaper guts
are
hung out to dry
and
CRACK
by
an old
demonic
washer woman
my memories
unwashed
and
soiled
then hang
On the broken
defence line
As the
miscreants of anxiety
continue
Their
undigestable
stomach turning
unabated march
to
unbridled success
On
carnivorous
wormy steeds
through
my
spaghetti twisted
intestines
highway
to my
kingdoms capitalized
ANX
these unbridled
demonic miscreants
Quash
my benevolent
blind knights
against
their
blistered and stained
mirror
shield walls
where
In
desperation to survive
i
assimilate
what
I awe
To endure
This tyranny
of
deformed figure heads
propergating
my picture
frames
i de-evolve
into
what i begun
in
the dark
before
i was induced
into
the transcending
fractured
light
©bg 2010
Your writing is spectacular!:)
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i am blowen away by your feedback. thank you . kindest regards bg ☺️😎☺️
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Rarely see the use of the word blowen! Typo?;) lol
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yeah lol guess i’m showing my age ☺️😎☺️
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Brilliant!
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thankyou ,your feedback is very muchly important to me . kindest regards bg ☺😎☺
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My first thought after reading this soundly structured poem was, “ouch”! “Demonic malcontents”; “Blistered and stained”; “This Tyranny”; The expression is quite clear to me since I recall such expressing myself as turned up in a few of my poems.
Thank you for liking my This And That (Oct. 20th)!
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hi Alan ,all good ,it was a good reading . cheers for your thoughts on “lost within” always appreciated to hear of others feelings towards their experiences . kind regards bg ☺😎☺
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thanks for the thumbs up ,muchly appreciated 😊
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This is incredible, you’re a beautiful writer. Just followed, can’t wait to read more!
Abby – http://www.seafoaming.com x
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thanks abby ,thanks for letting me know , muchly appreciated
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Woahh man!! Brilliant peace of writing. This blog is 💯💯💯❤.please visit my too it will be my pleasure that gr8 bloggers you visiting. But still dude you rock. 🙇🙇🙇🔥
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thanks for letting me know , muchly appreciated 😊😎😊
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Funny this is from 2010. Resonates even now.
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very few changes actually change anything 😊☺😊
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Beautiful. It’s so good to see posting these beautiful writings once again. I’ve missed you.
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thanks so much for saying 😊☺😊
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You are so welcome mate. Keep writing these beautiful pieces and keep sharing them with us.
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i’ll try my friend 😊😎😊
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I know you will. Hope you are well mate.
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Thank you!
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all good your most welcome ,but i’m not sure for what 😊☺😊
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for the haiku!
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which one , I’ve written a few lol .
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lost within…the one you posted yesterday
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cheers 😊
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