the lighthouse doesn’t exists in the emptiness
so the jagged tooth rocks can’t be seen
beneath the current sticky bloodied darkness
where the voids poison eats away one’s ship’s spleen
one’s lungs are full of the voids foul gas
a buoyant heart no longer keeps one’s ship afloat
cause breathing has corroded away one’s mass
while the perps preached scriptures as the antidote
one takes a short drop into the black hole
of the drowning pool
drifting through the void all you hear is a hum
drifting through the void a veins about to burst
drifting through the void all one feels is numb
drifting through the void
all one feels is a scream echoing the first
morbid Angels breaths fatten ones blacken sails
cannibal corpses feast on one’s ships salted bane
screams behind the shadows guided the forged nails
the land of no return lost under twelve days of rain
a storm of unstoppable burning flaming acid rain
eats the bedeviled flesh of ones fatten sails away
ones ship is rudderless for it’s the scythe parting one’s vein
bleeding one into the bloodied darkness to escape
ones decay
one takes a short drop into the black hole
of the drowning pool
drifting through the void all you hear is a hum
drifting through the void a vein about to burst
drifting through the void all one feels is numb
drifting through the void
all one feels is a scream echoing the first
smokey tendrils coil from ones dried rolled paper-thin tongue
ones resin memories are ground into fuel for the beast
dragged down into the cancerous bloating of the voids lung
ones residue absorbed to block the light from uncovering the feast
the suspended one has a vivid dream of the immortal dead rising
while black dogs tear the reflective moons breasts to bloody pieces
the craters of the moon are filled with grief from
one’s own eyes uprising
while the black dogs devouring feral reflective hunger
never ceases
one takes a short drop into the black hole
of the drowning pool
drifting through the void all you hear is a hum
drifting through the void a vein about to burst
drifting through the void all one feels is numb
drifting through the void
all one feels is a scream echoing the first
© bg 2017
I think first line would also be effective as a refrain. It certainly represents the poem.
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true ,i might reuse it on another piece latter on . thanks for your feedback ☺😎☺
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The Void …. and then there was Light. Creation cures. ❤️
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cheers for your perspective ,always good to get folks thoughts ☺😎☺
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great is the only word for … well, all of this. looking forward to reading, feeling more. speaks right to us, all of us, everywhere
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thanks ,i really appreciate you letting me know , great to receive your feedback 😊😎😊
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Wow. That’s thought-provoking and an interesting metaphor for a number of different situations.
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that there is 😊thanks for your feedback ,i appreciated your thoughts ☺😎☺
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Sounds like a scary nightmare. Thank you for visiting my book review blog a few days ago!
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yes ,your quite right . thanks for your feedback muchly appreciated ☺😎☺
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Beautiful. I’ve missed your posts. I’m so glad I get to read them once again. Cheers Mate!!
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thanks ,yes i’ve been a bit slack recently , will try to blog more regularly ☺😎☺
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You’re welcome. That’s understandable. Everyone needs to time rest. Can’t wait to read the next post.
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I found this terribly sad.
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hi Anna ,that is to be expected , how ever i appreciate you reading and commenting upon it as i know a lot of my work can be a bit of a downer . kind regards bg 😊😎😊
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Very nice work! Perfect for Halloween! Naked hugs!
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hey buddy , cheers for your feedback , muchly appreciated 😊😎😊
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Thank you for the haiku! Naked hugs!
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☺😎☺
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I likes the rhymes….good structure.
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hi Michael ,thanks for your feedback , muchly appreciated ☺😎☺
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Depression as a nasty inner war…I’ve been there. Good work with rhyme.
Thank you for liking my post!
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glad you made it back from the front 😊thanks for commenting ,much appreciated.😎
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well written, dark verses…showing a soul without the light of God. i pray the light opens for you, so you can write verses of joy.
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