you’re a suitcase pilot
beer goggles
bulging
out your bloodshot eyes
as you sits
strapped down
on a racing
bronze gurney
speeding down a corridor
swish swish
smashing
crashing
through glass panes
of
blinding splinted light
separated
only by
the sticky gooey emptiness
of chaos
which
smells of blue cheese
between
ragged exhausted breaths
rum shots
and
strong coffee
you gets over
the
Finish tape
that
always
trips
another gurney race
to start
as it rains
toe tag filled
fortune cookies
exhausted
the continuous
insomniac race’s
feel rigged
lost already
even
as
onwards
one races
while
crowds of portraits
cheer you on
with their silent stares
the
wreaths of flowers
framing
their let down
party balloon
faces
blooming
with
helium filled maggots
inside
you’re so constipated
with lies
old faded costumes
myths
all
tied up in knot
twisted
intestines
that
you just fill with
shitty
memorabilia
from
earlier races
triumphs
that one can’t
dump
victories
you only remember
in eye watering
smelly
sticky
poisonous
gas
bubbles
escaping
your
gimp mask zipper
the pasts
balled up
winning grundies
old manky
sweat stains
have taken on
the rank smell
of
formaldehyde
while tumors
fill the
space
you’d left
for your next
races
trophies
the gurney
clatter’s
and
rattles
bouncing
down stairs
one
never evolved
to climb
yet
one last
resilient thought
exist
one
was only
ever forged
upon the gurney
to ride
down
life’s collapsing
falling
sky scrapers
puerile
propaganda tagged
spored
corridors
as a sacrifice
hell
another finish line
approaches
one can hear
the almighty roar
of
the crowd
one
can feel their heated
breath
leap out
flames from a furnace
cracking
ones
leather casing
heroically
vainly
onwards
towards
the
gates
off
the
screaming
groaning
suffering
bowels
of
Tartarus
©bg 2017
Again intense. This one needed to be reread. And reread. There are many way to interpret this poem but each leads to further interpretation. If, as I expect, your desire is to wake up long dormant brain cells, you have succeeded.
LikeLiked by 1 person
hi mr mel ,i’m glad you had a few reads and i hope you enjoyed the imagery in your interpretations .cheerz for the feedback , muchly appreciated ☺😎☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful.
LikeLiked by 1 person
cheers , always good to get your feedback ☺😎☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome. Cheers.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Whew! I’m out of breath.
LikeLiked by 1 person
😎
LikeLike
lol ain’t we all 😊😎😊
LikeLiked by 1 person