there was an old sun that killed the knight
the legend says it was quite the smite
as tales go its a yawn
it all went down at dawn
then into the day that sun took flight
©bg 2022
author's notes- not a Limerick it's a lymberbrick
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resurrecting the trashcan bard 
Cool!
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thanks 🙂
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What’s the difference between a limerick and a limberbrick…asking for a friend. 😉
Very clever use of metaphors.
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the weight of the structure.and thanku 🙂
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I should have known. 🙂
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i don’t know why. it was cool you asked . 🙂
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I’m a curious sort. 🙂
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its a good way to be 🙂
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I suppose…but it’s gotten me in trouble a few times. 😉
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